The inflated style is itself a kind of euphemism. A mass of Latin words falls upon the facts like soft snow, blurring the outlines and covering up all the details. The great enemy of clear language is insincerity.
The common faults of American language are an ambition of effect, a want of simplicity, and a turgid abuse of terms.
[British Prime Minister William] Gladstone is a sophisticated rhetorician, inebriated with the exuberance of his own verbosity, and gifted with an egotistical imagination, that can at all times command an interminable and inconsistent series of arguments to malign his opponents, and glorify himself.
1st Earl of Beaconsfield
Conciseness in art is essential and a refinement. The concise man makes one think; the verbose bores. Always work towards conciseness.
Superfluous words simply spill out when the mind is already full.
Neil Kinnock's speeches go on for so long because he has nothing to say and so he has no way of knowing when he's finished saying it.
He who talks much cannot talk well.
So what's the point of using words nobody else knows or can say comfortably? I just don't understand that.
Words that add no new information or aren't repeated for emphasis are just padding. A sentence may carry three or five or eight of them, each one as unnoticeable as an extra two ounces on your hips but collectively adding up to a large burden of fat.
Don't gobblefunk around with words.
This trial has developed in the most remarkable manner, the insane love of speaking among public men. We are wading knee deep in words, words, words ….
impeachment of President Andrew Johnson Garfield was then a Congressman
I don't like to repeat myself.
He has the gift of compressing the largest amount of words into the smallest amount of thoughts.
Being able to write an idea down succinctly doesn't make that idea any better than one which rambles on a bit. It just comes to the point sooner.
He spares no resource in telling of his dead inventions... Bare verbs he rarely tolerates. He splits infinitives and fills them up with adverbial stuffing. He presses the passing colloquialism into his service. His vast paragraphis sweat and struggle; the
There is something laughable about the sight of authors who enjoy the rustling folds of long and involved sentences: they are trying to cover up their feet.
Look for all fancy wordings and get rid of themAvoid all terms and expressions, old or new, that embody affectation.
I'm a prolific overanalyzer. And I can always use 15 words in place of three 3, no matter what.
A word too much always defeats its purpose.
Whose are the truly labored sentences? From the weak and flimsy periods of the politician and literary man, we are glad to turn even to the description of work, the simple record of the month's labor in the farmer's almanac, to restore our tone and spirits.
The first part of the party of the first part shall be known in this contract as the first part of the party of the first part shall be known in this contract-- Look, why should we quarrel about a thing like this? We'll take it right out, eh?
I would feel weird if I wasn't able to be longwinded, or have information-overload on our songs.
Who on earth is going to use 'utilize' in a text message, a whopping seven characters including the always-hard-to-type 'z,' when you can say the exact same thing in three characters? I can't think of a sentence in which 'use' can't replace 'utilize.'
I remember thinking when I was in college that a lot of these known Chomsky-like, verbose, high-lefty thinkers made absolutely no sense, but I thought that was my problem.